Can someone tell me what they think of my story?

I think your story is amazing. Your style, your use of vocabulary is spectacular. I found the word concave very good. Many just say it was curved, but that word just gave its beat. Its really amazing how you wrote a story that was a dream. Not too short and not too long which is really great. You left me in suspense at the end of the story and hooked me in the first sentence. I read all of it. If you continue writing like this, you will be a famous author.